Orange Natural Diamond

Orange Natural Diamond
I need your opinions on this story that I wrote. ITS VERY LONG. You dont have to read it all just skim.?

YOU DONT HAVE TO READ EVERYTHING, JUST SKIM THROUGH IT.

AND DONT JUST SAY IT’S GOOD! TELL ME WHAT YOU LIKED ABOUT IT.

AND GIVE ME YOUR SUGGESTIONS.
The Wing Hunter: Can you elaborate on this. I dont understand you.

WOW! Chick that’s some good stuff. It was suspencful and kept me wondering what was gonna happen next. Like is the girl’s memory ever gonna come back? Is she gonna get reunited with her parents? That’s really good work and I like your writing style. Its easy to follow and understand. I wanna know where I can get more of this story from heck, I’d buy the book.

Orange Natural Diamond
Orange Natural Diamond
Orange Natural Diamond

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